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Needs an editor... "She remained still like a small animal" Really, like a humming-bird? Be specific.
"he lingered over a platter of seasoned roast finch skewered on the leg-bone of a hare" In what world would using a Hare bone skewer enhance any dish? Trying to evoke hedonism but missing the mark. Now I must discover how to cook a finch in such a way as you can actually eat that tiny bird, presumably bones and all.