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The story is somewhat interesting, but it is repetitive as it moves back and forth through the POVs. The chapter changes are a bit odd. It would make more sense to change POV with a new chapter. The book could use an edit. I wish they explained the fight exams better, why did Alora have to fight Darian twice?

This is a good story, but it is need of some editing. It randomly changes POV - sometimes you are told, sometimes you are not, and it may or may not be at chapter change. That makes for a very jarring story that could easily be smoothed. There are several typos (or grammatical errors). To instead of too, missing letters and I corrected spelling. Chapter 41 includes a section that is repeated as chapter 42.