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Guys I’m so bored do I dnf or just power through

I can’t do it anymore. I despise every character, most of all the self righteous FMC who thinks she’s so much better than everyone.

The most egregious error was the writing itself. Misplaced punctuation was rampant which made reading and comprehending a difficult task in itself. There are superfluous words in every sentence and I’m tired of muscling my way through books for a number.

This is more of a skimming book than a read-every-word book. I get so very annoyed at the middle school level conversation.

😭😭😭

The yearning is bonkers oh my daysss he’s just a man in loveeee

Also, if he’s wearing a mask, how does she keep noticing his smirk or other facial expressions?

This feels like Caraval or OUABH fan fiction. There’s a Dante character with a face mask/cage like Chaos who is also a vampire… the writing seems similar to SGarber as well

I’m so very weary of hungry women in books eating nothing but pastries and bread. Eat some protein girl

I have so many thoughts about this and only one is on the good side. At least the story is not boring much.