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Sabrina Maddox
Sabrina Maddox is 62% done
I can’t do it anymore. I despise every character, most of all the self righteous FMC who thinks she’s so much better than everyone.

The most egregious error was the writing itself. Misplaced punctuation was rampant which made reading and comprehending a difficult task in itself. There are superfluous words in every sentence and I’m tired of muscling my way through books for a number.
May 28, 2026 02:51PM
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Sabrina Maddox
Sabrina Maddox is 58% done
This is more of a skimming book than a read-every-word book. I get so very annoyed at the middle school level conversation.
May 28, 2026 08:54AM
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Also, if he’s wearing a mask, how does she keep noticing his smirk or other facial expressions?

This feels like Caraval or OUABH fan fiction. There’s a Dante character with a face mask/cage like Chaos who is also a vampire… the writing seems similar to SGarber as well
May 24, 2026 04:35PM
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I’m so very weary of hungry women in books eating nothing but pastries and bread. Eat some protein girl
May 24, 2026 04:28PM
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