Sabrina Maddox’s Reviews > Potion of Deception > Status Update

I can’t do it anymore. I despise every character, most of all the self righteous FMC who thinks she’s so much better than everyone.

The most egregious error was the writing itself. Misplaced punctuation was rampant which made reading and comprehending a difficult task in itself. There are superfluous words in every sentence and I’m tired of muscling my way through books for a number.

This is more of a skimming book than a read-every-word book. I get so very annoyed at the middle school level conversation.

I’m so very weary of hungry women in books eating nothing but pastries and bread. Eat some protein girl