Status Updates From Tharn's Hunt (Barbarians of...

nvm im just insane, but the backtracking is annoying

am I crazy or does this story keep telling me one thing and then rewriting it a few chapters later? I thought Tharn was clan leader???

the little bit of worldbuilding and lore dump introduced here was fucking shit

at this point
id rather go with these rival clans

it would at least be more exciting than the shit we got in these two stories so far

also

barely touched on the human women
there were at least two injured in the crash
and at least one older woman
none have been mentioned since

so fucking infuriating

shit writing.

i ended up skimming most of this and i regret it

clearly
this author cant seem to write characters

they all sound the fucking same

i feel violent.

after i finish this shit

i need to def ban and blacklist this author

the writing style is NOT FOR ME

the quips the fmcs give every so often is fucking cringe. my blood is boiling.

if nothing else
these are all just more to add to the pile of textbook examples of SHIT writing i can but likely wont look back on

ugh

fucking shit

welp

so far
this is even worse than the first book

and so obviously ai slop

.

the stupid as fuck chapter titles continue

the inner monologues by both mcs are infuriating to read
i hate being in both their minds and povs

the fmc is worse

i cant even rn

im going to chapter page skim read

these cover photos are ugly as shit

i reallyyyy hope this fmc is better than her sisters book

I lost all respect for Justine. I get that Rok is your soulmate, but Jackee is your sister! Your Rok is built for this planet while Jackee is not! At least Jackee hesitated, but she ultimately chose her sister.

I love the chapter titles!