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Starlight
is 12% done
welp
so far
this is even worse than the first book
and so obviously ai slop
.
the stupid as fuck chapter titles continue
the inner monologues by both mcs are infuriating to read
i hate being in both their minds and povs
the fmc is worse
i cant even rn
im going to chapter page skim read
— Aug 01, 2026 06:56PM
so far
this is even worse than the first book
and so obviously ai slop
.
the stupid as fuck chapter titles continue
the inner monologues by both mcs are infuriating to read
i hate being in both their minds and povs
the fmc is worse
i cant even rn
im going to chapter page skim read
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Starlight
is 90% done
the little bit of worldbuilding and lore dump introduced here was fucking shit
at this point
id rather go with these rival clans
it would at least be more exciting than the shit we got in these two stories so far
also
barely touched on the human women
there were at least two injured in the crash
and at least one older woman
none have been mentioned since
so fucking infuriating
shit writing.
— Aug 02, 2026 12:25AM
at this point
id rather go with these rival clans
it would at least be more exciting than the shit we got in these two stories so far
also
barely touched on the human women
there were at least two injured in the crash
and at least one older woman
none have been mentioned since
so fucking infuriating
shit writing.
Starlight
is 90% done
i ended up skimming most of this and i regret it
clearly
this author cant seem to write characters
they all sound the fucking same
i feel violent.
— Aug 02, 2026 12:23AM
clearly
this author cant seem to write characters
they all sound the fucking same
i feel violent.
Starlight
is 16% done
after i finish this shit
i need to def ban and blacklist this author
the writing style is NOT FOR ME
the quips the fmcs give every so often is fucking cringe. my blood is boiling.
if nothing else
these are all just more to add to the pile of textbook examples of SHIT writing i can but likely wont look back on
ugh
fucking shit
— Aug 01, 2026 07:05PM
i need to def ban and blacklist this author
the writing style is NOT FOR ME
the quips the fmcs give every so often is fucking cringe. my blood is boiling.
if nothing else
these are all just more to add to the pile of textbook examples of SHIT writing i can but likely wont look back on
ugh
fucking shit
Starlight
is starting
these cover photos are ugly as shit
i reallyyyy hope this fmc is better than her sisters book
— Aug 01, 2026 04:05PM
i reallyyyy hope this fmc is better than her sisters book

