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Alyssa W
is on page 253 of 485
I need to know more! Can Dare hurry up and trust Aella so we get more of his secrets?
— Jan 05, 2026 10:17AM
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Julia (scriptamortalia)
is 4% done
This book could’ve been 200 pages shorter bc the author is over-explaining everything. It’s a completely inorganic info dump.
In 29 PGS there were 16 LINES of dialogue total - some being only a handful of words exchanged. The dialogue does not flow naturally & there is so much stilted narration btwn lines you forget what they said right before. It’s all TELL, no reader trust no weaving into storytelling nada
— Nov 09, 2025 07:39PM
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In 29 PGS there were 16 LINES of dialogue total - some being only a handful of words exchanged. The dialogue does not flow naturally & there is so much stilted narration btwn lines you forget what they said right before. It’s all TELL, no reader trust no weaving into storytelling nada
Nikki
is 73% done
Aellas uncle seriously needs to be taken out 🙃
— Sep 03, 2025 06:04AM
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