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Aug 28, 2023 03:21AM Add a comment
Last Chance Motel (Last Chance Romance #1)

Doina Condrea
Doina Condrea is 39% done
The way I get both perspectives all at once is really weird. Like “Mike wanted to say...but thought it was corny.” and then Eva thinks it would be corny but romantic and she’s disappointed he didn’t say whatever.
It’s just all in the same paragraph and the same chapter one after another and it’s kind of distracting? I’m used to the chapters for Him and Her being separated. Otherwise I enjoy the story.
Nov 15, 2018 11:42AM Add a comment
Last Chance Motel (Last Chance Romance #1)

Doina Condrea
Doina Condrea is 39% done
The way I get both perspectives all at once is really weird. Like “Mike wanted to say...but thought it was corny.” and then Eva thinks it would be corny but romantic and she’s disappointed he didn’t say whatever.
It’s just all in the same paragraph and the same chapter one after another and it’s kind of distracting? I’m used to the chapters for Him and Her being separated. Otherwise I enjoy the story.
Nov 15, 2018 11:42AM Add a comment
Last Chance Motel (Last Chance Romance #1)

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