Status Updates From The Immortality Game

I'm getting pretty close to the end and it almost they felt like the plot is just really taking off.... And it moves that a pretty good pace I like that.... But I wonder if he can wrap it all up here in the next hour or so.

This is incredibly boring and the multiple POVs are killing me. I'll give it until page 100 before I DNF.

There's been action from the first few pages, but it's strangely boring and detached. I don't feel any of the suspense the author wants me to feel. The rest of the book had better not be like this, I swear. *slams fist on the table* I need my cyberpunk fix, you hear me? YOU HEAR ME?!

Mmmm, I'm not liking this writing already.

The second sentence in: “Her preference was for rock from the quaint times when people played their own instruments and wrote their own songs. Lennon and McCartney, Waters and Gilmour, Plant and Page…‌demigods of a dead age.” So our MC's a hipster? *exhales loudly*