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Jasmine
is on page 57 of 346
To many pov switches to random characters.I really have no idea what is going on half of the time
— Jul 09, 2022 12:15AM
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Aleixie
is 60% done
Does Malick ever shut up?
I think this author needs to cut down on a lot of useless thoughts text and revisit the "show, don't tell" concept.
— Mar 14, 2022 07:55AM
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I think this author needs to cut down on a lot of useless thoughts text and revisit the "show, don't tell" concept.
Aleixie
is 50% done
This is really dragging on. Carole writes a whole lot of nothing for paragraphs. Just skip to the point. there doesn't need to be a paragraph of thoughts between every line of dialogue.
and Malick's awful instalove? His endlessly lecherous thoughts? Jfc, dude is endlessly in emotional pain and all you can think about is how to best take advantage of him? you are garbage
— Mar 13, 2022 08:21PM
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and Malick's awful instalove? His endlessly lecherous thoughts? Jfc, dude is endlessly in emotional pain and all you can think about is how to best take advantage of him? you are garbage
Aleixie
is 27% done
The love these brothers have for each other, how they fight for each other and how they'll sacrifice themselves for each other is absolutely heart wrenching and their seperation is actually making me cry crocodile tears. 😭
— Mar 13, 2022 10:48AM
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SammiSue
is 74% done
Umeia rolled her eyes, snorted. Right. Those two had definitely been busy comparing biceps when the gods were handing out brains.
Lol! I love my darkness with some humor. And visa versa. This book is hitting the spot!
— Dec 29, 2018 10:38PM
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Lol! I love my darkness with some humor. And visa versa. This book is hitting the spot!
SammiSue
is 33% done
Interesting so far. :-)
I'm really not a fan of flashbacks throughout an entire book, but I'm so intrigued by the premise of the Untouchables and just the world building in general, so I think I'll stick with it for now...
— Dec 17, 2018 08:58PM
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I'm really not a fan of flashbacks throughout an entire book, but I'm so intrigued by the premise of the Untouchables and just the world building in general, so I think I'll stick with it for now...








