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Aleixie
is 50% done
This is really dragging on. Carole writes a whole lot of nothing for paragraphs. Just skip to the point. there doesn't need to be a paragraph of thoughts between every line of dialogue.
and Malick's awful instalove? His endlessly lecherous thoughts? Jfc, dude is endlessly in emotional pain and all you can think about is how to best take advantage of him? you are garbage
— Mar 13, 2022 08:21PM
and Malick's awful instalove? His endlessly lecherous thoughts? Jfc, dude is endlessly in emotional pain and all you can think about is how to best take advantage of him? you are garbage
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Aleixie
is 60% done
Does Malick ever shut up?
I think this author needs to cut down on a lot of useless thoughts text and revisit the "show, don't tell" concept.
— Mar 14, 2022 07:55AM
I think this author needs to cut down on a lot of useless thoughts text and revisit the "show, don't tell" concept.
Aleixie
is 27% done
The love these brothers have for each other, how they fight for each other and how they'll sacrifice themselves for each other is absolutely heart wrenching and their seperation is actually making me cry crocodile tears. 😭
— Mar 13, 2022 10:48AM
