Status Updates From The Plans I Have for You

i don’t think i’ve ever seen anyone with green under eye bags and yet every character in this book has green under eye bags

i have no clue what the fuck is happening

i am intrigued by the premise and the writing is mostly good but there are occasional blips like the narrator saying she could taste blood in her throat and it’s like… last i checked we don’t have tastebuds in our throat like what does that even mean