Status Updates From Shifting Sands

A book with two male MCs you simply CANNOT have this much of a shift in first and third person. ‘“I didn’t know you still played cards,” I said. He studied the black eye and swollen cheek. The dots connected themselves and I was touching the wound again.’ I AM CONFUSED

‘I felt like I had wallowed in the sand but it was the weight of the city pressing down on him.’ Am I out of my mind of does this sentence shift from first person to third person??

I’m barely 10 pages in and the amount of grammar errors in INSANE