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Erin
is 12% done
‘I felt like I had wallowed in the sand but it was the weight of the city pressing down on him.’ Am I out of my mind of does this sentence shift from first person to third person??
— Sep 20, 2026 10:22PM
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Erin
is 25% done
A book with two male MCs you simply CANNOT have this much of a shift in first and third person. ‘“I didn’t know you still played cards,” I said. He studied the black eye and swollen cheek. The dots connected themselves and I was touching the wound again.’ I AM CONFUSED
— Sep 21, 2026 01:24AM
Erin
is 4% done
I’m barely 10 pages in and the amount of grammar errors in INSANE
— Sep 20, 2026 09:44PM