Status Updates From Sainted in Smoke & Honey

It’s something about it that I don’t like. I don’t like how she jumps from scene to scene without a break. I also don’t like feeling like it’s constant yearning idk how to describe it

This book is like page after page of yearning. Soft whispers and confessions, gentle rugs and safe throat grabs. Idk how else to describe it.

I don’t like that the book doesn’t show clear breaks. One line they’re in the car and the very next line one MC is in the shower solo. Make it make sense.