Status Updates From Swallowed: A haunting dark ...

a bug touched me while reading this and my soul left my body for a sec

i’ve checked the genre of this like 3x to make sure it’s horror and not smut lmfao what on earth is going on with The Planet here

Ew a diary this late out of nowhere ? 😬
I don’t feel like I like that. To me it’s a device that you start with or explicitly look for from the start, not something you bring up to resolve plot lines.

Hmm 🤔 I think the mix between erotica and horror is nice but I don’t know about how it’s actually done. The ratio is more leaning on the horny which is fine but maybe the characters background called for more horror and a bit more reaction to what they are experiencing. They are completely entranced which I know is the point but I’d say it’s too much the point because it obscures their stories.

Yeah guys that was definitely something. Intense as hell. I’m still not sure about the significance of the story itself but the experience is on point.

Bruh… great insight or unnecessary worry ? We’ll see.

“He’s too good for me.” “It’s late, but I selfishly want to keep him for a little longer. Even if it’s just to talk.”
This is bad for my heart.

I love the anxiousness. The rhythm between the interactions with the world, the objects inhabiting it and the characters. It’s sharp and natural.

Horniness levels are over 9000

Wait a minute does this mean what I think it means ?

lol there is so much horny energy

Anyway love the enthusiastic team or at least they express it so. It’s dynamic.

I'm blaming Hex

Boy. I picked it up only because it was short and already on my Kindle. Sex pollen trope, hanahaki at home, sentient Planet and its flora wanting to mingle and all I wanted is some good body horror. I am trying my best not to squint too much because this feels like a fanfic which wasn't written for plot.