Status Updates From Runaway Moon (Bound by Moon...

Writing is choppy and doesn't flow together nicely. I feel like I'm missing half the story and I'm just supposed to know everything about their past together. And it's not like I have a lot of pages to make up for it and find this stuff out as well as resolve the conflict.

I’m not going to finish it. I found this difficult to read up until this part, and have decide I won’t finish it. It’s like reading a story my 5 year old wrote.

This could be pretty good but gideon is gonna make or break this I think