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Counted a total of 18 spelling, grammar or punctuation mistakes😬 definitely could have been edited some more

„And her heartbeat was a faint, barely-there echo.“

Bro her plot armor is crazyyy💀 you’re telling me after that she still ain’t dead??

„My father—and I—had been wrong about many things“

Bro just noticed?

„Give us the boulder!” His voice was shrill with desperation.
“No—fuck you!” someone else screamed.“

Tf kinda dialogue is that😭😭💀

„Because I do love you. You’re my best friend. And that’s just as valuable as a lover.“

Wild thing to say to someone you just friendzoned💀💀

„Kis her until she forgot the weight of the world pressing down on her“

When he gives you a kis😍😍🥰❤️‍🔥

„would she still idolize him if she knew what he really was?“

Wait why are we acting like the fathers actions weren’t pretty reasonable?💀 like what else was he supposed to do? sacrifice his 15 (FITFTEEN!) year old daughter??

„Wait. That daughter? That was the daughter Ragnall had come to rescue?“

??? Well, how many others of his daughters are missing?

„Rykr’s eyes, molten hot with lust, swept down the curve of my throa. His thumb traced the hallow at my collarbone“

Throa? Hallow at her collarbone? Why are we inventing new body parts??😭😭

„They not the Vangar“

Me when they not the Vangar😔

„I peered closer at the dark-skinned beauty“
💀💀

„Where Seren was petite and lithe, Amahle was tall, lean, and graceful. Dark-skinned.
Both were beautiful, though.“

The way you can just tell that this was written by a white person😭😭😭😭😭

How much more often are they going to literally say how appealing they find each other?
This should be shown, not told