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Leelo is 53% done

The author uses the word “ash” a lot. A different descriptor needs to be used. Half the time it doesn’t even make sense with the story.

This book is starting to feel like it was written with AI. It has that repetitive, stilted style that is AI uses.

— Aug 06, 2026 05:49AM Add a comment

Leelo is 46% done

I HATE her use of lyrical prose. I hate the similes and metaphors used.

— Aug 05, 2026 06:53AM Add a comment

Arrie Hill is 80% done

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