Status Updates From The Ministry of Witches

This is so different! ❤️

Keeps talking about “imposter syndrome” but she literally is an imposter and deeply inexperienced so it’s not really imposter syndrome.

Clearly set in the Harry Potter universe, without authorization (I assume), and risking an easily avoided lawyer's letter.

Multiple chapters should begin with the word "the," but oddly do not.

And the archivist has a big flashing neon sign above his head that says "Enemies to Lovers."

Well edited so far, but with one glaring exception: excess commas between adjectives. I counted 40 in the first 10% of the book. Most authors slip in a few, but this is just dire. "Single," for instance, never needs a comma after it.