Status Updates From Shadow Reaper

This is getting ridiculous. How do you end three consecutive chapters by her being rendered unconscious


Also the “battle” took place over one chapter?

I’ve officially mentally checked out

What bothers me is the dissonance between the vernacular and the genre/what’s happening. Why do we have so much cheap flirting and modern speaking pattern when this is a YA high fantasy? And why are we suddenly waxing poetry when she speaks her feelings? It feels incredibly out of place because nobody talks like that. If you adapt modern day language, you cannot have epic confessions. It’s ridiculous

I cannot stand when the FMC is stubbornly in denial about the truth and her feelings and needs to be told by everyone else that they know what she really wants and how she really feels. Can we stop doing that? It makes the FMC annoying, immature, and stupidly stubborn. The flirting also feels like I’ve read it a million times already because the FMC denies her emotions & it results in a pattern