Status Updates From Determined (Determined, #1)

Well. Didn’t read this. I looked up my book Determined and...😩

She is letting a guy she just met buy her clothes and isn't even deterred when another woman warns her about the H. This h is wandering a little too close to donkey territory.

Story is kind of boring. Its just the h going about her day, eating, going to work, hanging with her friends, and dating.

Hooked already.....

*Working on the review*

'Determined' really fells like a re-read of 50 shades so far....

What is wrong with this childish 24 years old going 14? Her favorite word SHIT. I lost count of how many times she said it. And her need to recollect herself about any encounter with the H. They had sex and she went to the bathroom afterwards to recollect. IMMATURE

I'm 21% done with Determined: It goes like this:"MY STOMACH GROWLED AGAIN.I TURNED MY FOCUS TO THE MEAL IN FRONT OF ME.I PICKED UP THE TINY BOTTLE OF KETCHUP AND PEELED OFF THE PLASTIC SEAL AND OPENED THE CAP WITH A 'POP'.I TOOK A KNIFE TO COAX IT OUT OF THE BOTTLE AND ONTO MY PLATE..." Now,why do I keep reading?

I was prepared for eye rolling but not for gagging. so far it reads like a elementary student describing a field trip : the place, people they see. Too simple and amateurish . SPOILER: The h got so flustered when she met the H she had to go outside for fresh air and headed home (the H and the girl w him gave her a ride home). She was completely fine until she met him. Eye rolling"

Boring routine:waking up, changing, brushing teeth, paying for coffe, coming back home, doing laundry, txting, showering, chose shoes, locking door, applying makeup, driving and again being speechless when seeing the H. Worse, less than 30 minutes and the H: <spoiler>any boyfriend, I don't want exposure to STD. Are your on the pill? heroine: No to both. Then proceed to have unprotected sex in a dark pantry</spoiler>

Now we're talking... Show her who's boss...

HOTNESS ALERT: Sexual tension & smut!
But above all swoon-worthy HERO alert. David Keith… I can’t even explain it but he’s a man of FEW words, so his eyes tell a story & when he does speak… you just wish you were the heroine. Add to that they are addicted to each other.

Though this is meant to be heroine, it could be any of us. Once I met David Keith I was a gonner. He’s quiet, commanding, observant & secretive. Still have only scratched the surface I’m sure.
Oh but he does like wall sex in pantries. Always a plus in my book!

I’m determined to meet David Keith. He made his money in gambling & later Silicon Valley.
He has brown hair & brown eyes and sometimes he wears dark-rimmed glasses. [drool & swoon]
(novella trilogy is complete)