Status Updates From The Need

every reference to a real band seems kinda forced?? but i think that’s a me issue idk

the nonbinary cannibal ate the stupid jock, this is amazing

Story continues to be interesting, while writing continues to be not great.
How many times do you have to remind readers that a character is “my stepmom, Janice.” Not every time she’s mentioned, that’s for sure. We get it.

Author writes teenagers like they’ve never been a teenager before. Too many incorrect uses of the word “like.” Sacrifices good writing and correct grammar for what they think a teenager sounds like.
Also, 5 perspective changes in one (short) chapter is too many.
However, interesting concept and story that has me continuing to read.

How is this so boring?

Why are we following so many freaking people!?!?

My head hurts trying to keep track of them all.

Good grief.

I like that we're getting all three perspectives in this fam. I was thinking we wouldn't get the Mom.