Status Updates From Loverboys Classic 1: Ali, S...

Screw this, even in short stories I expect a little more plot respecively built up to sex than what I got here. Seriously it just suddenly happens. That is plain lazy, no actual built up, barely any eroticism, in fact I don't even know what the plot is except for "Ali has troubles with the Wesir" and I am about 1/4 or so through the book.