Status Updates From Awakening the Demon (Demons...

so i didnt rant on all i wanted and needed to
i wont be
bc there’s just too much

its all the umbrella of how shit the writing and storytelling is anyways

so obv
the only good parts of the book was everytime someone reacted to the garden and its bounty

the rest was SHIT.
boring sex scenes or the inner thoughts of the fmc bitch

not even bitch
bc i like bitches

she’s just fucking annoying.

but damn it

will i read book two rn

yes

😒

and unhappily too.

if only to see if the cliffhanger with all the court, garden and blight stuff from this book will be resolved

also if the two human women will meet
and if they will be others

currently
only two books in this series
ill be peeved if the second book ends with a set up for a third human fmc 🤦🏻‍♀️

im deleting the book from my digital library and files asap after this

im no longer keeping around shit books as textbook bad writing examples to look on later

my goal should and will be to keep books i actually love and admire

so yeah
i fucking said it

this book was shit bc of the writing and the fmc

and i cant even really say the mmc is the only thing that saves the story for me
it wouldnt be entirely true

bc nothing saves it for me

the story overall is still shit

or rather
the writing is fucking TRASH.

like in this story

she’s technically the fmc
esp as a reader
im also assuming most if not all other readers are obv human not demons
and women

so ofc readers would and SHOULD be able to empathize/sympathize and root for the fmc
putting themselves in her shoes usually

but shit writing LIKE THIS
nahhhhh
this bitch is too fucking annoying as a character for me to relate to or even tolerate

one
bc the blurb for book two spunds boring as fucking hell.

two
bc the writing will no doubt be the same shit.

.

the fmc is as only tolerable bc of what she brought to the table
as in her input on how to grow shit
thats it

the mmc on the other hand
was obv the best character

im not even going to get into all that

i hate it when the alien or other character is more interesting than the supposed mc

the story ended on a fucking cliffhanger

sure
they got a pass from the court and she was released
and things are going well for the mcs
their garden and sharing their abundance
by contract with the king as well as just sharing with their “neighbors” and friends
basically whoever was brave or desperate enough to fly over

but jfc
i hate the set up and worldbuilding on the last fucking pages

at 10%
i was ready to dnf
but i read one specific review who said they also nearly stopped after the first two chapters
bc the writing was fucking shit (same)
but it got better for them

so im not going to agree or disagree with them

the writing continued to be shit
specifically
how close to ai slop it sounded
the prose and style
ugh.

im convinced ai was involved
or ai is inspired by similar writing

its been a few days since i last read anything
prob close to a week idk

so obv im not in the mood to read this fucking shit writing

i find my mind constantly straying to other thoughts
bc the writing is absolutely atrocious already

very ai slop reminiscent
if not ai slop exactly

i cant even rn

im in a foul fucking mood.

Last six chapters or so, all they’ve been doing is having sex 😭😫 I know my girl is TIRED

Why is this so good 😭😭😭