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Starlight
is 90% done
at 10%
i was ready to dnf
but i read one specific review who said they also nearly stopped after the first two chapters
bc the writing was fucking shit (same)
but it got better for them
so im not going to agree or disagree with them
the writing continued to be shit
specifically
how close to ai slop it sounded
the prose and style
ugh.
im convinced ai was involved
or ai is inspired by similar writing
— 7 hours, 42 min ago
i was ready to dnf
but i read one specific review who said they also nearly stopped after the first two chapters
bc the writing was fucking shit (same)
but it got better for them
so im not going to agree or disagree with them
the writing continued to be shit
specifically
how close to ai slop it sounded
the prose and style
ugh.
im convinced ai was involved
or ai is inspired by similar writing
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Starlight
is 90% done
so i didnt rant on all i wanted and needed to
i wont be
bc there’s just too much
its all the umbrella of how shit the writing and storytelling is anyways
so obv
the only good parts of the book was everytime someone reacted to the garden and its bounty
the rest was SHIT.
boring sex scenes or the inner thoughts of the fmc bitch
not even bitch
bc i like bitches
she’s just fucking annoying.
— 7 hours, 28 min ago
i wont be
bc there’s just too much
its all the umbrella of how shit the writing and storytelling is anyways
so obv
the only good parts of the book was everytime someone reacted to the garden and its bounty
the rest was SHIT.
boring sex scenes or the inner thoughts of the fmc bitch
not even bitch
bc i like bitches
she’s just fucking annoying.
Starlight
is 90% done
but damn it
will i read book two rn
yes
😒
and unhappily too.
if only to see if the cliffhanger with all the court, garden and blight stuff from this book will be resolved
also if the two human women will meet
and if they will be others
currently
only two books in this series
ill be peeved if the second book ends with a set up for a third human fmc 🤦🏻♀️
— 7 hours, 30 min ago
will i read book two rn
yes
😒
and unhappily too.
if only to see if the cliffhanger with all the court, garden and blight stuff from this book will be resolved
also if the two human women will meet
and if they will be others
currently
only two books in this series
ill be peeved if the second book ends with a set up for a third human fmc 🤦🏻♀️
Starlight
is 90% done
im deleting the book from my digital library and files asap after this
im no longer keeping around shit books as textbook bad writing examples to look on later
my goal should and will be to keep books i actually love and admire
— 7 hours, 32 min ago
im no longer keeping around shit books as textbook bad writing examples to look on later
my goal should and will be to keep books i actually love and admire
Starlight
is 90% done
so yeah
i fucking said it
this book was shit bc of the writing and the fmc
and i cant even really say the mmc is the only thing that saves the story for me
it wouldnt be entirely true
bc nothing saves it for me
the story overall is still shit
or rather
the writing is fucking TRASH.
— 7 hours, 34 min ago
i fucking said it
this book was shit bc of the writing and the fmc
and i cant even really say the mmc is the only thing that saves the story for me
it wouldnt be entirely true
bc nothing saves it for me
the story overall is still shit
or rather
the writing is fucking TRASH.
Starlight
is 90% done
like in this story
she’s technically the fmc
esp as a reader
im also assuming most if not all other readers are obv human not demons
and women
so ofc readers would and SHOULD be able to empathize/sympathize and root for the fmc
putting themselves in her shoes usually
but shit writing LIKE THIS
nahhhhh
this bitch is too fucking annoying as a character for me to relate to or even tolerate
— 7 hours, 35 min ago
she’s technically the fmc
esp as a reader
im also assuming most if not all other readers are obv human not demons
and women
so ofc readers would and SHOULD be able to empathize/sympathize and root for the fmc
putting themselves in her shoes usually
but shit writing LIKE THIS
nahhhhh
this bitch is too fucking annoying as a character for me to relate to or even tolerate
Starlight
is 90% done
one
bc the blurb for book two spunds boring as fucking hell.
two
bc the writing will no doubt be the same shit.
.
the fmc is as only tolerable bc of what she brought to the table
as in her input on how to grow shit
thats it
the mmc on the other hand
was obv the best character
im not even going to get into all that
i hate it when the alien or other character is more interesting than the supposed mc
— 7 hours, 38 min ago
bc the blurb for book two spunds boring as fucking hell.
two
bc the writing will no doubt be the same shit.
.
the fmc is as only tolerable bc of what she brought to the table
as in her input on how to grow shit
thats it
the mmc on the other hand
was obv the best character
im not even going to get into all that
i hate it when the alien or other character is more interesting than the supposed mc
Starlight
is 90% done
the story ended on a fucking cliffhanger
sure
they got a pass from the court and she was released
and things are going well for the mcs
their garden and sharing their abundance
by contract with the king as well as just sharing with their “neighbors” and friends
basically whoever was brave or desperate enough to fly over
but jfc
i hate the set up and worldbuilding on the last fucking pages
— 7 hours, 40 min ago
sure
they got a pass from the court and she was released
and things are going well for the mcs
their garden and sharing their abundance
by contract with the king as well as just sharing with their “neighbors” and friends
basically whoever was brave or desperate enough to fly over
but jfc
i hate the set up and worldbuilding on the last fucking pages
Starlight
is 5% done
its been a few days since i last read anything
prob close to a week idk
so obv im not in the mood to read this fucking shit writing
i find my mind constantly straying to other thoughts
bc the writing is absolutely atrocious already
very ai slop reminiscent
if not ai slop exactly
i cant even rn
im in a foul fucking mood.
— 20 hours, 38 min ago
prob close to a week idk
so obv im not in the mood to read this fucking shit writing
i find my mind constantly straying to other thoughts
bc the writing is absolutely atrocious already
very ai slop reminiscent
if not ai slop exactly
i cant even rn
im in a foul fucking mood.