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I DNF this book at 38%. The structure was so confusing. It went back and forth between present day and the past way too often and the editing was bad. Repeating the same sentences and missing parts of the storyline. I kept going back to see if I missed something in previous chapters because it was not making much sense.

May try again at a later date but the writing is slightly repetitive and some scenes just don’t flow. I also did check out the end and there’s a part two

Still trying to get through it because I don’t like to DNF but the structure of the book between the present and the flashbacks don’t coincide .. it just feel like it’s all over the place

I’m really confused. The flashbacks and the present aren’t tying together and I’m trying not to DNF.