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This feels like ai. Sometimes the sequence does not make sense. The character development is not logical and jumps around.

How often can you write structural? Oh, and architectural, for that matter.

There are no bridges between the chapters at all and I find myself confused whenever starting a new one.

50% in and I still don’t know WHY they can’t be open about their relationship? Or being gay or whatever?

Not one sentence explains it and I have to assume.

In the first chapter, he drives a red Ferrari, in the second chapter a black Porsche…?

The adjectives used in the sex scenes are weirdly verbale related (folds, wet).

The description of the first sex scene changes between using condoms, not using condoms, mixing up round one and two.

Weird and maybe AI?

Dayumn idk what happened between the first four books in the series and this one but Im pretty sure the author got an editor...and it makes all the difference.