Lara’s Reviews > Dirty On The Ice: An Age Gap MM Hockey Romance > Status Update
Lara
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How often can you write structural? Oh, and architectural, for that matter.
— May 11, 2026 08:50AM
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Lara
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There are no bridges between the chapters at all and I find myself confused whenever starting a new one.
— May 11, 2026 02:03AM
Lara
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50% in and I still don’t know WHY they can’t be open about their relationship? Or being gay or whatever?
Not one sentence explains it and I have to assume.
— May 11, 2026 01:53AM
Not one sentence explains it and I have to assume.
Lara
is 11% done
In the first chapter, he drives a red Ferrari, in the second chapter a black Porsche…?
— May 10, 2026 12:44PM
Lara
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The adjectives used in the sex scenes are weirdly verbale related (folds, wet).
The description of the first sex scene changes between using condoms, not using condoms, mixing up round one and two.
Weird and maybe AI?
— May 10, 2026 12:27PM
The description of the first sex scene changes between using condoms, not using condoms, mixing up round one and two.
Weird and maybe AI?
