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Wombat
is on page 30 of 225
DNF...
Too much telling, not enough showing.
We stick with the main character, but instead of experiencing the many life-changing or important events - she tells us about them after the fact...
It all feels a little... distant.
— Jan 20, 2018 04:25AM
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Too much telling, not enough showing.
We stick with the main character, but instead of experiencing the many life-changing or important events - she tells us about them after the fact...
It all feels a little... distant.
Chocomeiske
is on page 32 of 225
32/222 pgs. Immersive this far and something I could easily read in one sitting. Unfortunately sleep calls...
— Jun 09, 2016 02:41PM
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