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DNF...
Too much telling, not enough showing.
We stick with the main character, but instead of experiencing the many life-changing or important events - she tells us about them after the fact...
It all feels a little... distant.
— Jan 20, 2018 04:25AM
Too much telling, not enough showing.
We stick with the main character, but instead of experiencing the many life-changing or important events - she tells us about them after the fact...
It all feels a little... distant.
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