Status Updates From Saltswept (The Earthsalt Du...

I want to like this so badly - the worldbuilding has potential, and I love how queer-normative and diverse this is - but I’m not sure I can move past how badly written this is. To me this reads like a messy first draft and it’s quite hard to get through 😭

Im really not sure how I’m feeling about this one. I’m quite enjoying Hanan’s chapters, which feel strongest to me, but both Ris and Finlyr’s chapters are just all over the place and not very well written. I’m going to keep going, but this isn’t really living up to my hopes so far

So far, this is a bit messily written, but I am intrigued by the plot!

i fear i don’t get the magic system at all

kind of tough to get into but i wanna give it a fair shot