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Siobhan
is on page 92 of 400
Im really not sure how I’m feeling about this one. I’m quite enjoying Hanan’s chapters, which feel strongest to me, but both Ris and Finlyr’s chapters are just all over the place and not very well written. I’m going to keep going, but this isn’t really living up to my hopes so far
— Jun 04, 2026 01:16AM
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Siobhan
is on page 114 of 400
I want to like this so badly - the worldbuilding has potential, and I love how queer-normative and diverse this is - but I’m not sure I can move past how badly written this is. To me this reads like a messy first draft and it’s quite hard to get through 😭
— Jun 04, 2026 09:10AM
Siobhan
is on page 49 of 400
So far, this is a bit messily written, but I am intrigued by the plot!
— Jun 03, 2026 10:19AM
