Status Updates From The Second Draft

oh ok

Low key sad that not having Sadie trumps not having her daughters. Not even low-key actually incredibly sad

Goddamn their kids are nosy

Love that she’s surrounded by so much support, also this is taking me forever because I keep getting distracted

Lost interest during the em dash stuttering sex scene and regained my interest when she finally strengthened her resolve enough to actually think about herself and her future. Cause I really think they should’ve talked more before anyway😭

Well goddamn

Let’s talk some more maybe

I don’t think I’ve ever closed a book and shut my device off as quickly as I did after I read the lines that followed. And I’m too scared to open it back up. We’re only 1/4 way through

“I promise I can be good”

Oh my fucking god stop it you’re so sweet I’m going to hurl

So repressed but it’s ok I still love you

Recognizing the aesthetics of (STEREOTYPICAL) lesbians but not something as simple as the sexual/romantic characteristics. Girl you’re gay.

Her not knowing anything about her kids is triggering me

I am going to be absolutely devastated. Idek if there’s enough room on any existing social media platform for me to share all the things I’ve already highlighted