Status Updates From Never Leave

So far, so good! The back-and-forth between past & present works well, though I don’t yet see how they are connected.
But a major event has just taken place & I am talking (out loud) to the FMC, telling her what to do. Clearly, I am invested in the outcome!

I know he must be bad but she knows how to write a smooth man 😆 #nailbiting. Also as a English major who loves Poe and just wrote an assignment with this story in it I feel attacked and framed as well 😂😂😭😭