Status Updates From Never Forgotten

just keep thinking how i would LOVE to be a copy editor, esp for someone local.
also curious about the first name change that i just caught. unsure if it's intentional and part of the plot or if something that happened in haste to move through the story.

Never Forgotten explores the landscape of a crime the victim suspects before it happens. I can tell through the author's words they are someone who is very attentive and attention-detailed in life, simply by the way they described the mall and surrounding atmosphere. I could see myself there. My encouragement for the author is to focus on showing over telling in some areas, but overall, this book hooked me from pg.1!