Status Updates From The Boss Omega: An East Roc...

Imcongruity!! Tell me how Lark can say 'oh, I didn't know that' when I, as a reader, have heard it at least 4 times? The most recent of which was when someone told HER that.

Random word all on its own. Can't tell if the rest of the sentence is missing or if it's it's just an add in.

I'm not sure about this- there have been a couple of instances that are red flags for me.
First- she thinks about how much she needs to run after having breakfast. Don't we get enough image issues in real life? That's not a healthy relationship with food.
Second- they just went to the nesting store and she *only* got shit in ecru (basically blank) and the favorite colors of her 24 hr old pack