Status Updates From The Moon Queen: Sanctum of ...

This book is revealing things so early that doesn’t have the emotional weight behind it. We are barely into story and barely know the characters and you’re dropping a twist that could have been kept longer for a more emotional blow.

You can really tell this is an arc copy because it’s one small mistake that needs to be fixed so it will not look like a plot hole. Because right now it’s a plot hole that the FMC knows the potential love interest name two paragraphs before he formally introduced himself to her and the readers.