Tanya T.’s Reviews > The Moon Queen: Sanctum of Starlight > Status Update

This book is revealing things so early that doesn’t have the emotional weight behind it. We are barely into story and barely know the characters and you’re dropping a twist that could have been kept longer for a more emotional blow.

You can really tell this is an arc copy because it’s one small mistake that needs to be fixed so it will not look like a plot hole. Because right now it’s a plot hole that the FMC knows the potential love interest name two paragraphs before he formally introduced himself to her and the readers.