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Lydia
is 17% done
The 3 parts prologue is UNNECESSARY!! I don’t need the first 15% to be a repeated stockholm syndrome between a rotation of a couple of sentences.
If the prologue wouldn’t be there, I would have been able to enjoy it. No more: “I love them, I do everything for them, they love me, I’ll be perfect for them, do better for them” every page. I don’t need a prologue. The first few chapters would have suffice.
— Jun 22, 2026 07:32AM
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If the prologue wouldn’t be there, I would have been able to enjoy it. No more: “I love them, I do everything for them, they love me, I’ll be perfect for them, do better for them” every page. I don’t need a prologue. The first few chapters would have suffice.
