Status Updates From Most Truly the Gentleman: A...

“The next evening took all the inmates of Longbourn…”

Really?? Inmates?? Were they forcibly confined there for some reason?

This is what happens when authors try to mimic Regency language they (themselves) are uncomfortable with… a simple, straightforward sentence in modern english does the job right 9 out of 10 times.

I have been having trouble concentrating on this story, the plot follows original P&P too closely so far, so it feels as if I am reading a summary (plus some new cameos starring Cnel Fitzwilliam) and not a different variation…

So far no real variation. I'm gonna skip ahead a bit ... well written though! No repetitive internal monologs so far...