Status Updates From Unconventional in San Diego

Unconventional in San Diego
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Carol Lynne (Goodreads Author)

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Brandielle is on page 122 of 198

Fate’s Bridge by Carol Lynne - meh. Hard to establish 2 MCs we care about in a short story, let alone 3.

— Feb 27, 2019 09:35AM Add a comment

Lily is on page 180 of 198

— Sep 16, 2017 07:51PM Add a comment

Lily is finished

— Sep 16, 2017 07:51PM Add a comment

Lily is on page 160 of 198

— Sep 16, 2017 07:08PM Add a comment

Lily is on page 100 of 198

— Sep 16, 2017 06:20PM Add a comment

Lily is on page 153 of 198

— Sep 16, 2017 06:19PM Add a comment

Lily is on page 76 of 198

— Sep 16, 2017 05:35PM Add a comment

Ann is 60% done

— Sep 13, 2015 12:42PM Add a comment

Ann is 40% done

The Unicorn story is next!

*squeeeeeeee*

— Sep 12, 2015 08:54PM Add a comment

Ann is 33% done

— Sep 05, 2015 10:21AM Add a comment

Bronwyn Heeley is on page 163 of 198

5 -- 4

— Aug 07, 2015 07:10AM Add a comment

Bronwyn Heeley is on page 163 of 198

4 -- 2.5 maybe 3
Repetative, like REAL 'i read the same line four time in the first oage' repetative.
To me, it needed a better BETA or MS editor. It had me rushing threw it, rolling my eyes and wanting ti highlight and send back so they could fix it before submitting.
The story itslef was good, the idea solid. exacusion was like i was reading a first draft.

— Aug 07, 2015 06:19AM Add a comment

Bronwyn Heeley is on page 124 of 198

3--3
Predictable, all i wanted to do was flip it forward and see the ending. It became a drag waiting for the end

— Aug 07, 2015 04:34AM Add a comment

Bronwyn Heeley is on page 83 of 198

2--3 maybe 3.5

— Aug 06, 2015 06:20PM Add a comment

Bronwyn Heeley is on page 42 of 198

1 - 4stars
unexpectidly good

— Aug 06, 2015 07:21AM Add a comment