Bronwyn Heeley’s Reviews > Unconventional in San Diego > Status Update

5 -- 4

4 -- 2.5 maybe 3
Repetative, like REAL 'i read the same line four time in the first oage' repetative.
To me, it needed a better BETA or MS editor. It had me rushing threw it, rolling my eyes and wanting ti highlight and send back so they could fix it before submitting.
The story itslef was good, the idea solid. exacusion was like i was reading a first draft.

3--3
Predictable, all i wanted to do was flip it forward and see the ending. It became a drag waiting for the end

2--3 maybe 3.5