Status Updates From Knight (MC #1)

gonna have to dnf this one... meh writing.

writing is meh. author sounds like a sportscaster spitting out key points with no finesse. The H doesn't sound autistic at all. There's no awkwardness to his choice of words or topics. He's supposed to be very quiet, but that doesn't come across either... just cause the author says so.

Couldn't go beyond chapter 12!

The storyline was ok. But who really knows, with all the fuck Pres. and fuck Jess...it was distracting. Nothing a good editor couldn't fix. There is a time and place for everything. FYI, not all the time, not every place. Concentrate on the story, not setting a Genesis record for the most "fucks" in a book.

I. Just. Can't. I'm not a prude by any stretch of the imagination, and I drop the "f" bomb at least once per day. but when every sentence must contain it, it gets old, boring even. Get a thesaurus. There is a plethora of curse words. Expand your horizons.