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The storyline was ok. But who really knows, with all the fuck Pres. and fuck Jess...it was distracting. Nothing a good editor couldn't fix. There is a time and place for everything. FYI, not all the time, not every place. Concentrate on the story, not setting a Genesis record for the most "fucks" in a book.
Aug 27, 2016 06:52PM
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I. Just. Can't. I'm not a prude by any stretch of the imagination, and I drop the "f" bomb at least once per day. but when every sentence must contain it, it gets old, boring even. Get a thesaurus. There is a plethora of curse words. Expand your horizons.
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