Status Updates From Buttermilk Ranch (The Hard ...

I’m so bored I decided to take a break and deep clean my kitchen…

Pronouns are ok to use. I don’t need to be reminded of the person’s name every other sentence and at the beginning of every paragraph. The prose, the dialogue and the narrative are very annoying so far. I don’t think I’ll be suffering through this much longer...

This story is pulling a cowboy... moseying along. Sheesh.

Taking a break.

"Andiamo, cowboy. Sembra che tu non sappia se controllarti il culo o grattarti l’orologio."

Sto adorando Paisley *_*

I am really enjoying this story.