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Persephone
is 34% done
I enjoy the concepts of this story and the diversity of the characters, but find myself slow to get invested. The world is explained with too many asides describing the functions of society, the history, the geography, etc. and I feel would be much easier to read if this was done through the actions and dialogue of the characters.
— Dec 24, 2017 02:08PM
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Kaa
is 92% done
And wait, when did Adelin say anything about Valeria? I'm so confused!
— Nov 22, 2017 11:44AM
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Kaa
is 87% done
1. It only takes 6 months to become a safe house?!
2. I thought that stuff could eat through metal?
— Nov 22, 2017 11:09AM
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2. I thought that stuff could eat through metal?
Kaa
is 18% done
This has such an interesting concept, but the writing style is making it really difficult to get into. (Oops, pages instead of %)
— Nov 18, 2017 03:48PM
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Alicia
is 79% done
I've lost interest in this. The last 10ish % was just tough to get through. I'm going to take a break from this one.
— Sep 14, 2017 07:40AM
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Alicia
is 49% done
That's horrible, what happened. But Celosia and Ianthe are just, ugh, I wanna hug them.
Also there was demisexual rep! On page demi rep! Also kinda seemed like pansexual/panromantic too, but it wasn't mentioned. So I don't know for sure.
— Sep 09, 2017 03:58AM
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Also there was demisexual rep! On page demi rep! Also kinda seemed like pansexual/panromantic too, but it wasn't mentioned. So I don't know for sure.
Alicia
is 29% done
It took me a bit to get into this, but I am. And that was real cute.
— Sep 08, 2017 12:54AM
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