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is 34% done
I enjoy the concepts of this story and the diversity of the characters, but find myself slow to get invested. The world is explained with too many asides describing the functions of society, the history, the geography, etc. and I feel would be much easier to read if this was done through the actions and dialogue of the characters.
— Dec 24, 2017 02:08PM

