Status Updates From Throwing Stones

I guess there is actually no mystery here. Not sure why it's marketed as paranormal, it doesn't feel like it

After such a great first part, now I really fear this is going to crash and burn...

This is eerie and mysterious, but I like that the story is taking its time to unfold

i’m not feeling this at all /:

so one of the characters is called ronan and i really wish he had another name cause i keep picturing ronan lynch in my head every time he’s mentioned

uhm?

I think my biggest problem with this book is that it doesn't really feel like a story? It's just like someone narrating their life, including a lot of the boring superfluous bits that don't really need to be there. I don't like the past-tense 'retelling' style it's written in either, and I don't think that helps with the over-complicatedness of it. Plus I can't connect to Ronan's character at all.

This book needs to dial back the OMG and WTFs, they're grating on me. Although I do feel like I'm being excessively harsh, because I am enjoying the story, I just wish it had been properly edited.

I'm not complaining about the development, but if that was supposed to be a plot twist I figured it out sixty pages ago.